I didn't quite make my goal, but I did come up with a first draft of a completely new episode which is strong enough that it's bumped another one to a (still-hypothetical) future season. Luckily I'm still ahead of my "real" deadline, our pilot listening party, which is still a couple of weeks away.
If anyone's curious, here are the first two scripts: Episode 1 as it was recorded and produced, and a draft of Episode 2. Comments and suggestions welcome! http://media.forgeryleague.com/scrip...1-produced.pdf http://media.forgeryleague.com/scrip...a-E2-draft.pdf